Wednesday 31 August 2011

Camping Nightmare

''Mum are we leaving yet''?  I screamed. We were going to Nelson for a holiday.  Mum, Dad, Hannah and I were camping sea side.  Oh yeah Hannah is my sister.


So we slowly got in the car and put up the pillows as a wall.  Hannah screamed at me because I pushed down the pillows but I didn't .HA HA!


We finally got there after two stuffy, hot and miserable days in the car.  The dog was barking at everything!  Mum, Dad, Hannah and I got out of the car and ran around, the dog was still going nuts at everything.  Hannah and I could hardly walk, everyone was really stiff from being in the car all day.


We put the tent and hammock up right in front of the sea.  It was really hot and sunny in Nelson.  We toasted marshmallows beside the fire.  All of he sudden Mum screamed "IT'S NINE O CLOCK!  You get to bed now!"  She was laughing and she was screaming at the same time.


Everyone got to bed late.  Suddenly we heard a mysterious splash.  We heard  something strangely different sliding along the shore.  It got closer and closer.  Mum, Dad and I were wide awake now.  Hannah was still sleeping.  We got out of the tent and Mum put on the torch and we saw two red evil eyes steering right back at us!  Dad made a horrific scream!  It sounded like a girl.  But then again it was scary.  It ran straight for us! "CROC!!" Mum yelled.  Suddenly it grabbed Dad's leg and tore it clean in half.


  The ride home was much comfier as we had a whole leg space more than before!!!!!

2 comments:

  1. Wow Bradley
    nice story!, It was like on the worst animal night mare on tv, but it was worse on tv because someone got ingered
    Sarah

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  2. i like the the story. You all ways come up with cool storys.


    From Brooke

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